Red Ashes

Although this might sound strange, I loved this! It's hiralious to me and that's all that counts in my mind - probably because I love this kind of stereotype-teasing humour. ...

Hi! Well, I'm going to come and review anyway, see if I get anything the others have missed. My technique is different and picky to say the least, but most ...

Okay, so this is a short story, but I was going to write a second part to it, since it was getting long. Tell me whether or not I should ...

I like wolves! :D My corrections will be in red, and, where possible, I will underline the bit of your work I am referring to. Alrighty then! Lone Wolf Preface ...

I will critique. Red are my correction, and, where possible, I'll underline the bit of your writing I'm correcting. Savvy? Well, we'll begin then... :D “Jump” said a voice from ...

Right, I'm here! Done my homework, posted my work - thanks for commenting :D - and now here to complete my promise. I see you've already got a second chapter ...

Well I liked the sound of this, so I shall review. Pardon for the red - my corrections. And I will underline, where possible, the bit of your work I ...

Well, what I can say is that this is a pretty demented story. :? I mean, since when does a brother take advantage of his little sister's weaknesses. (and body) ...

Her eyes wondered around the room. She layed lay still in the bed, confused. The sore and agonizing pain between her legs made her squirm in discomfort but it didn’t ...

Hi, my corrections are in red and the bit of your writing I am correcting will be underlined (where possible). :D Well then, I shall beginning. The place was northern ...

____________________________________________________________________________________ Very long ago, in a faraway land, there was a princess. She was beautiful in every sense of the word; her large eye

I am but the remaining pulp of a beaten, abused, abandoned, starving little girl. Nice beginning. :D This house is dark and it smells of dust and dogs. The dark ...

Heya, I'm Ash, I'll be your critiquer today! My corrections are in red and, where it's possible, I'll underline the bit of your writing that I'm marking. 'Kay? It better ...

Hi, I've been waiting for someone to critique my work and I was wandering about until I found this piece. So I will begin this instant. :D My corrections are ...

Gosh! Wow it is long! Well, I'm committed so... I'll do half now and maybe half later since my dinner's nearly ready. Sound good? Alright, then I'll begin. :D My ...